First Circle-The Circle for Run-on Sentences

"My guide had disappeared into the steam she seemed to float in the air, and not notice the extreme heat, but by now, she had to have noticed the ruckus I had caused in the river."

Second Circle-The Circle for Comma Splicers

"The bestial and serpentine parts of his body are permanent, that is why the face is the most dangerous thing about Geryon."

"People see Hell as a place of punishment, therefore, it is logical that there be some trait of the land that evokes emotions of fear, pain, and torture."

"Richard then began to cry, apparently he was still ashamed of his forced surrender."

Third Circle-The Circle for Negligent Commas

"However the Old Man of Crete Statue is also a product of Dante's consolidation of various works of other authors."

"None of them talked to each other and all of them wore cloaks that covered their entire body, including their face."

"I looked at my guide who anticipated my usual confusion and answered me."

"Earth is comprised of many different colors which is one of the reasons it is so beautiful but the land in Hell does not have this privilege."

"'This is the end of our journey and my friend and I must get going' Siddhartha said."

Fourth Circle-The Circle of Schism between Subjects and Verbs

"Obviously, condemning these ideas as heresy and viewing them as homage to the Devil himself was not far behind."

Fifth Circle-The Circle of Dangling Modifiers

"Engulfed in a feeling of sickness,/My guide notices my eyes of sheer terror."

Sixth Circle-The Circle of

Ninth Circle-The Circle of